Wednesday, 28 March 2012

Blog # 6: Short Story Overview



Conflict:
Mark has never met his birth parents. He was raised in foster care, and has spent his life working in menial jobs, without a solid income. He has no family, but has decided he wants to make enough money to visit his parents on the Island of Hawaii. Mark has no real skills that would make him much money, but he feels that if he can become a juggling performer, it may fund his trip. Mark has never juggled, and does not have very good hand-eye coordination, so he will have to work very hard to become a good juggler, so people will watch him, and give him money. The problem is that where he lives, street act are not uncommon, so Mark will have lots of competition, and will have to work very hard if he wants to stick out as an elite performer in his neighbourhood.
Theme:
Mark has never grown up with much, he never has had any money to spare, and has barely been able to make ends meet most months, however, he believes his parents may be able to help him now, as they were not able to raise him when he was born. Mark is determined to work hard and show dedication to his goal of becoming a great juggler. He knows he has given up on too many things in his life, and he is determined not to let this opportunity pass him by. Mark will need to incorporate practise time into his already hectic life, working two part time jobs. He will need perseverance, and discipline if he has a shot of making any money as a juggler, with all the competition around.
Setting:
Set in Mark’s home of Phoenix, Arizona, present day. Mark lives in a small single bedroom apartment by himself. He is single, and has never been married. He enjoys his life, but is not content with the fact he has never met his birth parents. This bothers Mark greatly, and has caused him to look for a way to fly himself to Kauai, Hawaii, where his parents live. Mark is determined to accomplish this goal, and his dream of going to meet his birth parents gives him hope for the future, and determination to complete his task.
Basic Plot events:
Initial action: Mark is not content with his uneventful life, and after being abandoned by his parents at birth since they were not able to take care of him, he has decided he wants to find go meet and visit them, in their home of Hawaii.
Rising action:  Mark begins practising juggling and becomes very good. He picks a place to perform his act, but soon after, realizes he has lots of competing acts standing in his way. Mark feels unwelcome by the other performers around him, as they are making his money making scheme very challenging to accomplish.
Climax: Mark realizes that the competing jugglers and he are not getting along, and it is not working for them to share the corner space, so they mutually decide to have a juggling competition, judged by the public, in order to decide which juggler will be able to remain on the corner, and who will have to leave.
Falling Action: The jugglers compete, and to his amuse, Mark puts on an excellent performance, and wins the competition, giving him sole access to the prime performing corner in his neighbourhood.
 Resolution: Mark continues his juggling work in front of much larger audiences, providing him with the money to go on his trip to Hawaii. Mark buys his ticket, and flies to Hawaii. He meets his parents, and they are overjoyed to see him.
Protagonist:
-           Fairly tall (5 ft. 10 in.)
-          Silvery Grey full head of hair
-          Independent
-          Timid
Antagonist:
-          The antagonist is Marks timidness, shy nature, and lack of confidence. This is what is holding him back from being recognized by the public as a great juggler. He doesn’t enjoy confrontation, and because of this has missed job opportunities and promotions in the past. Part of this stems from Marks harsh foster care upbringing, but part of this is simply Marks personality. These are issues that are preventing Mark from achieving his goal, and are standing in his way.  

Tuesday, 13 March 2012

Blog # 5: Introduction

Perplexity

Sight
Sound
Smell
Taste
Touch
Feeling
Bright red leaves falling
woodpecker
 Sap
Salty sweat
Damp leaves
perplexity
Dark  coloured bark
Leaves crunching
Blood
Sweet sap from a tree
Wet bark
uncertainty
Dim light
Fresh sap dripping from a tree
Smoke
My own blood
Small twigs
anxiety
Light coloured leaves
Twigs snapping



discomfort

Crisp autumn leaves stuck out before me, I glanced at them intently, my knees shaking, barely able to support my weak body. The sharp contrast of the reddish leaves before me caused me to zone out the rest of the forest around me. The dark bark of the red oak tree accentuated the leaves and my greatest fears simultaneously. If it weren’t for the warm colours given off by the tree, I knew I would be inconsolably afraid in amongst my dull surroundings.
            The bitter, yet familiar taste of my own blood reassured me of my surroundings. I consumed the liquid greedily and took a moment to evaluate my perplex situation. What again had led me to this dim forest, and before the beauty of this grand oak? I shuffled forward through the layers of damp, fallen leaves. Inching forwards I came beneath the extravagant expanse of the oak tree.
            I lifted my neck upwards, starring face to face with damp bark. I watched fresh sap trickle elegantly down the broad trunk of the tree. I yearned for the sweet sensation of the sap upon my lips. As I moved closer, the tree provided me the premature assurance I had so desperately longed for. And at that moment, I decided I could remain no more.